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Cool tune. This is clearly your forte lol

SpeTheof responds:

trueee, thanks man!

Feedback wanted?

Well, this is a really cool song.

To Keep doing:
I LOVE the aggressive kick in the beginning, and the melody is sick. The song is a good bpm.

To Fix:
Add a riser. They help a lot. The melody is too high an octave. This is ok, but maybe add a layer of the same melody underneath, an octave below. Oh, and the clap, in the beginning, doesn't quite fit- it may just be too loud.

Finally, I think that overall the melodic dubstep song is too much melodic and not enough dubstep. If you don't have a good synth for basses, In most people's opinions serum is the best bet, though its almost 200$. If you think it would be better to rent it, go to splice.com. They have an option to rent serum for 10$ per month for 1 months. After that, you own it.

May I ask what DAW you use?

SpeTheof responds:

Thanks for the suggestions, i use fl studio!

Super cool!

Depressing xD

I noticed that the guitar is a little off beat a little bit throughout the whole thing. Is this on purpose?

kynivoid responds:

No, it's not on purpose lol i'm just not great at keeping rhythm. I'm surprised you think it's the guitar that's off a bit though, since the drum beats were made in FL Studio and everything else was recorded in Audacity. So when it came time to match the perfect computer-generated drum tracks with the rest of the song, it became difficult to do without a little bit of editing to try and make the drums as arrhythmic as the rest of the instrumentals. So my guess is that may have thrown the whole song off-beat, but at that point there was nothing I could really do without scrapping the whole song and restarting, which I'm just too lazy to do.

I'm sorry if none of that made any sense, it's kinda hard to explain my process. A lot of my songs are thought up semi-on-the-spot. I'm trying to improve, though.

I'm glad you enjoyed it otherwise! :)

Nice tune! I like the little chirps.

Tip: what is "Ducker" in Auxy is called Sidechaining in every other DAW. So, if you want the ducker effect:

https://www.google.com/search?q=how+to+sidechain+in+lmms&oq=How+to+sidechain+in+lmms&aqs=chrome.0.0.6528j1j7&sourceid=chrome&ie=UTF-8#kpvalbx=1

FelixZophar responds:

Okay, thanks!

Sorry to hear that man :(

I have depression too, I get it.

MRM3 responds:

Thanks man.
Sorry to hear that.

I came here from the video xD

igorZlo responds:

You are welcome!

Lmms is a great program.

FelixZophar responds:

Yeah. I'm working my way around it!

This is.... Amazing

The reason I give it 4.5 instead of 5 is the drums. They don't quite fit. If you need extra drums, try cymatics.fm, a great website.

What is lmms?

MRM3 responds:

LMMS is a music making platform.
https://lmms.io/
Thanks for the site! I'll check it out :)
Thank you for the nice comment, bro, It means a lot. I worked hard on this ;)

Cool.
That clicky perc throughout the piece is annoying IMO. IT sounds like a metronome xD
If you like it, go ahead.

Other than that, slightly repetitive, but It took less than an hour, so that is to be expected.

FelixZophar responds:

I wasn't at all trying to make it repetitive...

he/him or they/them idc

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