The drums feel off. So does the lead. Triplets don't really fit here.
The snare roll was painful xD
Also, the overall song is a little boring and repetitive.
That said, the composition was on point.
The drums feel off. So does the lead. Triplets don't really fit here.
The snare roll was painful xD
Also, the overall song is a little boring and repetitive.
That said, the composition was on point.
There's this little white noise thing happening that makes me want to drive my head through the wall. Also, the drop is super repetitive.
I never thought I'd say this, but the drums have too much sidechaining on.'
Other than that, the song is all set and sounds good. Nice!
How long did this take?
Not super long. I did it just more to get myself back into the rhythm of making songs fast. I'm honestly surprised it turned out this well. And that white noise is due to the 10 or so dB of distortion on the master... :p
This sounds like a wild marshmallow.
Ima get that pack now.
Haha that was the goal. Stay tuned for more!
This is.... creepy.
Wow, this is really.....
Thank! :3
Nice. How is FL Mobile?
Also, is this 3xOsc?
FL Mobile is a watered down version of Normal FL. Like there are LESS sample plugins, and some of the mixer stuff are different, like there's no waveshaper, but there is "distortion". And no that is not 3x oscillator, its actually a Supersaw, I believe an exclusive plugin to FL mobile.
This is sick AF
Recommendations:
Fix the chords. To me, they sound generic. That's just an opinion.
Fix the Lead in the beginning. Sometimes it rests on the wrong note.
At 0:54, the song is very empty.
At 1:00 The growl is unpredictable enough too be weird.
The pre-drop vocal doesn't fit, quite. It sounds too fast.
A couple of the basses take up too much space in the mix, EQ wise.
Good things:
The drop is sick AF like I said before.
The Mixing is almost perfect.
The Drums are great
The entire piece has mostly spot-on sound design.
I might have already asked this, but what DAW do you use?
Thx for the feedback, i use Fl Studio 12
This reminds me of a Series of unfortunate events lol
The accordion fits super well! Nice Job!
The buildup lead synth thingy feels a tad out of place. Maybe you could put Fruit LP on it and slowly use an automation clip to remove it?
The drop also feels empty, but that's just IMO.
Thank YOU!!
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